that story i wrote

its not right to read half a story then criticize the portion you read and say the rest was too boring you read.

why the fuck do you think that's an okay thing to do?

i dont want your fucking criticism if you don't have enough goddamn patience to fucking read the whole fucking thing

spinnythings wrote:why the fuck do you think that's an okay thing to do?

if your story is boring and i start thinking about going to safeway to buy pepsi when i'm still trying to read your story then it obviously has issues that need to be addressed

creamammy wrote:

spinnythings wrote:why the fuck do you think that's an okay thing to do?

if your story is boring and i start thinking about going to safeway to buy pepsi when i'm still trying to read your story then it obviously has issues that need to be addressed

its not my fucking job to make a piece just so it can hold your attention

this is literally just some highschool english project you're not going to remember by the end of the year and you're totally losing your shit over it

spinnythings wrote:

creamammy wrote:

spinnythings wrote:why the fuck do you think that's an okay thing to do?

if your story is boring and i start thinking about going to safeway to buy pepsi when i'm still trying to read your story then it obviously has issues that need to be addressed

its not my fucking job to make a piece just so it can hold your attention

thats EXACTLY what your job is as a writer

creamammy wrote:this is literally just some highschool english project you're not going to remember by the end of the year and you're totally losing your shit over it

because its fucking wrong to criticize only one piece of a work and not even look at the rest

calm down

spinnythings wrote:

creamammy wrote:

spinnythings wrote:why the fuck do you think that's an okay thing to do?

if your story is boring and i start thinking about going to safeway to buy pepsi when i'm still trying to read your story then it obviously has issues that need to be addressed

its not my fucking job to make a piece just so it can hold your attention

uhh that's exactly your job retard

oh fuck ammy said it before me

creamammy wrote:

spinnythings wrote:

creamammy wrote:if your story is boring and i start thinking about going to safeway to buy pepsi when i'm still trying to read your story then it obviously has issues that need to be addressed

its not my fucking job to make a piece just so it can hold your attention

thats EXACTLY what your job is as a writer

holy shit yeah sure if you're a FAGGOT and a SELLOUT

spinnythings wrote:

creamammy wrote:

spinnythings wrote:its not my fucking job to make a piece just so it can hold your attention

thats EXACTLY what your job is as a writer

holy shit yeah sure if you're a FAGGOT and a SELLOUT

lol

creative work is done to satisfy the creator and anybody else who enjoys it. i can't do SHIT if you dont like it if i dont want to

spinnythings wrote:creative work is done to satisfy the creator and anybody else who enjoys it. i can't do SHIT if you dont like it if i dont want to

you clearly give a ton of shits about me thinking your intro sucks

"Lel i don't care about what the HATERS think" spinny wrote, tears pouring down his cheeks and falling onto his now-wetting keyboard, "i don't give a FUK"

we have some hella philosophical differences here dude

i'm well within my moral and ethical right to criticize the part of the story that i read

the rest of it might be a fucking masterpiece, but the parts i read weren't, and i pointed out the flaws in those parts

what the FUCK is your point, nerd

creamammy wrote:i'm well within my moral and ethical right to criticize the part of the story that i read

the rest of it might be a fucking masterpiece, but the parts i read weren't, and i pointed out the flaws in those parts

what the FUCK is your point, nerd

that what you did was disrespectful to me

i never criticized the whole story

i criticized the parts that i read

you're clearly just grasping for reasons to bitch at me for not liking your entire writing

spinnythings wrote:

creamammy wrote:i'm well within my moral and ethical right to criticize the part of the story that i read

the rest of it might be a fucking masterpiece, but the parts i read weren't, and i pointed out the flaws in those parts

what the FUCK is your point, nerd

that what you did was disrespectful to me

it's not fucking disrespectful

i even gave you advice on how to improve your fucking writing. i could have easily written "TL;DR BORING AS FUCK SHIT SUX" and then left the thread

i think calling someone who's trying to help you improve your writing a 'douchebag' is way more disrespectful than them not reading every last word of your story

spinnythings wrote:

creamammy wrote:i'm well within my moral and ethical right to criticize the part of the story that i read

the rest of it might be a fucking masterpiece, but the parts i read weren't, and i pointed out the flaws in those parts

what the FUCK is your point, nerd

that what you did was disrespectful to me

what le fuck

HOW DARE YOU NOT WORSHIP MY AMAZING WRITING ABILITIES

dont get me wrong though spinny!!!!!!!!!!!i m not calling you a shitty writer but you need to handle critique better

"It's not fucking disrespectful if I don't like your story," exclaimed Ammy in exasperation at Spinnythings. "All I did was give you some fucking criticism," he continued, as tears began to well up in Spinny's eyes.

"You--you are so disrespectful to me, A-Ammy. F-Fuck! Fuck YOU!" shouted Spinny as his eyes began to sting. Suddenly, he felt a strange vibration in his chest, like his insides were hollow. He exhaled vigorously, shaking from both the discomfort of the feeling and his tears that were now freely flowing off his cheeks. His head was beginning to hurt as his face turned red.

"Haha, are you fucking CRYING, nerd? I can't fucking believe you," began Ammy; but before he could finish his bit of motivational advice, a mental barrier inside of Spinny exploded into fragments; and with that, so did his self control. He began to flail his arms violently and scream as if his testicles had been lopped off by a samurai warrior's stainless steel katana. The blood drained from his face as his skin turned a sickly, pale green.

Spinny became the Incredible Hulk and the resulting rampage left eleven Canadians dead.

Red Epoch wrote:

spinnythings wrote:

creamammy wrote:i'm well within my moral and ethical right to criticize the part of the story that i read

the rest of it might be a fucking masterpiece, but the parts i read weren't, and i pointed out the flaws in those parts

what the FUCK is your point, nerd

that what you did was disrespectful to me

what le fuck

HOW DARE YOU NOT WORSHIP MY AMAZING WRITING ABILITIES

dont get me wrong though spinny!!!!!!!!!!!i m not calling you a shitty writer but you need to handle critique better

thats not the problem the problem is he read half of the story then criticized the half he read and refused to read the rest because it was "too boring" and that offends me